This is my first ever attempt at erotica so constructive comments are encouraged and appreciated. Please let me know what you think!

“Don’t do it Julia.”
After a second, Julia pried her eyes away from the door and looked back at me where I sat on the couch next to her. “Don’t do what?” she asked innocently averting her eyes again.
“Don’t go throwing yourself at Jackson!” I said.
To her credit, Julia didn’t bother playing ignorant again. It was obvious that she was into Jackson from how she always talked about him. She just stared back at the door through which Jackson had just left and sighed. “I know.”
“Know what?” I scoffed. “Know that it’s a violation of university housing contract to bang your roomie or that doing so is just an overall horrendous idea whether it’s against the rules or not?”
“He’s not my roommate,” she argued. “He’s my suitemate. We have different rooms and bathrooms and everything.”
“It’s still living with him. You share a living space and see him with bedhead and no shirt often enough that it would still be a disaster if things ended badly between you two.”
“You don’t know what it’s like!” She wined with a dramatic throw of her arms. “You couldn’t sleep with anyone you lived with if you tried!”
I didn’t try to argue. She was right. My roommate, Heather, and I were both straight, so she and I wouldn’t even be on each other’s radar, but the boys I shared a kitchen and living room with were no more accessible to me. Vincent was so enamored with his long-time girlfriend that he drove across the country at least once a month just to see her, so he was a no go even if he was my type. Eric on the other hand was totally my type and hot to boot.
When I first met the boys on move-in day, I thought it would be hard not to get hung up on my new neighbor. Eric’s tussled black hair, blue eyes, and tall, toned body wrapped in fitted jeans and a black t-shirt had made me hyper-aware of my unflattering clothing and the smell of car and sweat that clung to me after my 7 hour drive between my home town and the college.
After I was finally done moving all of my stuff up to my new room, I had made quick work of showering and changing from my basketball shorts and baggy t-shirt and put on a nice summer dress in the hopes of making a better second impression.
The four of us had opted to grab pizza to get to know each other and I learned quickly that Eric was more than just a pretty face and a hot body. He was also smart, passionate, talented, and successful. For God’s sake he was already the owner of his own successful small business at just 22! Who WOULDN’T find this guy totally doable?
His boyfriend Gavin seemed to agree with me.
On the up side, I wouldn’t be tempted to break my housing contract. Right?
On the downside, I still couldn’t help but drool over Eric even if, though he was totally my type, I didn’t even have the right parts to be his.
I groaned to myself remembering all the times Eric didn’t bother to put a shirt on before wandering into the living area. All those chiseled ridges and edges that made up his hard abdomen and defined pecs made me want to lick him all over. I had to remind myself constantly that he’s not only taken, but gay.
Julia laughed bringing me back to the present. “Poor Lanie and her busted up gaydar. Remind me again how you COULDN’T tell Eric was gay? That man might as well wear a rainbow flag around. It’s so obvious he’s into men though he’s a little less… struts and glitter than Gavin.”
“Shut it Julia. You know I’ve never been good at noticing these things.”
“That’s true. Remember when you accidentally went on a date with that one girl and didn’t realize it until you had her tongue down your throat?” Julia’s words were becoming harder and harder to understand through her uncontrollable giggles, but I understood well enough to start getting annoyed.
“I’m leaving,” I said standing to go.
“You said you could have sworn that Eric was checking you out that first week too. Remember?” At that point, Julia was almost literally rolling on the couch howling in laughter. “And then you met Gavin and-“
I let the door to her room slam shut between us before she could finish. I stalked down the hall and let myself into my own dorm, still brooding in embarrassment, until I crashed into something hard right in the doorway.
“Woah there,” A deep voice crooned. “Careful now.”
I looked up to see Eric’s bright blue eyes staring down at me with mirth.