Ramona & Gabriel Pt1 (Ramona)

Authors note: I am not a writer and I am not writing a book. I simply like reading and thought I’d give this a go for fun. So criticize if you must, I can take it 😉 If you are like me and can’t get emotionally invested in characters without a bit of back story then this might be for you. I’m not sure where this story is going but I will tell it from two perspectives in multiple parts. I will try to upload once a week. Not every part will have sex but we’ll get there.

EDIT: I’d like to add that this is an alternate part one. The original part one told from Gabriel’s perspective was supposed to be published first but it’s still pending.



I’d heard my parents arguing the night my dad hired Gabriel. My mother didn’t want me hanging around the shop with a teenage boy. My dad tried to calm her down but she refused to let it go. She called him an “Illegal immigrant” and warned that my father could get into trouble for hiring him. It finally ended with my dad telling her he wasn’t changing his mind. Gabriel had come to him honest enough asking for work.

I was intrigued to say the least. I was only partially aware of why my mother didn’t want me around a teenage boy, but this boy was different from the other boys. He had an accent I tried to mimic secretly when I was alone, and he was polite.

He was quiet, and always working. He shadowed Tim, our inspection mechanic, closely and seemed to be remembering everything. He adored my father who never had to ask him twice to do anything. He even held respectful conversation with my mother when she visited. But he ignored me, almost blatantly. It became my obsession. At first I tried to get his attention through flattery and kindness, bringing him water, and telling him he did an awesome job.