Characters
Dan
Blonde hair. Blue eyes. Senior in high school. Leader of “Blazin Thunder.”
Loryn
Black hair. Green eyes. Junior in highschool. Just transferred.
Madylyn
Mechanic and friends of “Blazin Thunder.” Helps Dan by giving him the second floor of the garage as a place to live.

Blazin Thunder
Johnny
A laid back person that likes watching Dan race. Dan’s best friend since they were kids. Also Secondary driver for Dan.
Billy
A crazy nut that hates the “Black Widows.” He will do anything to take them out if he had the chance. He also drives won cars back to the garage.
Fred
Loves being a mechanic. Learned everything he knows about cars from Madylyn. Works with Madylyn at the garage after school.
Joe
The only one in the group that has a job outside the garage. Works as a stocker at Frank’s Grocery’s. Also takes bets at Dan’s races.
Luke
A lover not a fighter, but has a serious temper when he gets mad. Loves joking around. And hates the “Black Widows” as much as Billy.

Little Devils (Blazin Thunder’s Girls)
Lauren
Leader of the “Little Devils.” Is in love with Johnny.
Racheal
Tom’s older sister. Loves getting into things that are out of her reach. Also a former member of the “Dark Ravens.” Has a crush on Joe.
Crystal
A real tease when it comes to the boys in “Blazin Thunder.”
Wendy
Has a crush on Fred, but is too shy to admit it. The other girls tease her about it a lot. She knows their only joking though.
Dianne
Has a job at the Burger Palace. Want’s to open up her own bakery.

Black Widows (Main Rivals)
Jason
Leader of the “Black Widows.” Self-centered. Also hatess to lose. Treats his little brother like a slave.
Randy
Best friend to Jason. Always looks out for him.
Tony
Jason’s little brother. He hates it when his brother embarasses him in front of other people.
Jimmy
High school drop out. Mechanic for the “Black Widows.”
Tom
Racheal’s younger brother. Is in love with Mary.

Dark Ravens
Vicky
Leader of the “Dark Ravens.” An old witch. Practices witchcraft and teaches Mary spells.
Kate
A complete nerd that does all of the “Dark Ravens” and “Black Widows” school work.
Mary
Gothic and is learning to be a Wiccan. Performs various spells which scare a lot of people.
Ariel
A real snob. Has a secret crush on Luke, but can’t confess her love.

First day back at school I’m walking to class and accidently bumps into a girl accidently making her drop her books. The girl has long black, wavy, waist long hair. Pale skin and freckles across her nose and cheeks with green eyes. She’s wearing a pink dress with black flats. “I’m sorry about that” I said, while bending down to help her pick up her books. She bends down to help pick up the books and looks at me. Her eyes twinkle from the sunlight shining from the windows. Our hands lightly touch on the final book when I ask, “you’re new here aren’t you. She nods and grabs the book. The bell rang and she said shyly and softly, “well I should be going now.” She left, heading to her class without even saying “thank-you.” I head to class and couldn’t get her out of my mind. The bell rang for lunch. I walk through the crowd to find my group of friends outside waiting for me. We started for the cafeteria when I saw her. I told my buddies I’ll catch up with them in a minute. I walk over and say, “hey I didn’t get your name earlier.” “Oh I’m sorry. My name’s Loryn,” she said. I told her that, “Well there’s a race going on after school, and I was wondering if you wanted to come?” She said “yes,” and as I turned to walk away when she asked, “what’s your name?” “My names Dan,” I tell her. I walk back to my friends. We talked and bull-shitted till the bell rang telling us lunch was over. We stayed till the halls were clear and skipped the next few classes. We were just headed out the door when Fred turned the corner and Luke stopped us from turning. “Mr. Carsona! Why aren’t you in class?” asked Principle Marishino. “I was using the bathroom ma’am” said Fred. “Well couldn’t you use a bathroom that’s closer to your classroom?” asked Principle Marishino. “Yes ma’am I’ll go use that restroom then” replied Fred. “Good now go” ordered Principle Marishino. “Yes ma’am, moving ma’am” replied Fred as he turns back round the corner and the principle heads back towards her office down the hall. “Mr. Carsona. Yes ma’am, moving ma’am,” jeered Billy. “Hey cut it out you guys. We need to get back to the garage.” I noted. As we walk towards the door the bell rings for the end of school. “Well thankfully it’s Friday, I’m glad we got the weekend to ourselves,” mentioned Joe. “Yeah, hey you guys lets get over to Burger Palace. We’ll take “Spit Fire” to the race,” I said. Once we’re at the garage we open the door to find Madylyn working under “White Lightning.” “Can’t you guys ever help working on these scrap heaps?” asks Madylyn. “Why would we do that you taught us everything we know,” jokes Johnny. I smack him in the back of the head at that remark and say “well aparently not if it’s not working already.” “Oh it’ll work. We just need some parts,” retorted Billy. “Have you guys forgot about the scraps in the back? It’s still a mess of parts” gibed Madylyn. “Well we’ll look for the parts after the race. We might even have a new engine to work with,” mentioned Johnny. “Or you might lose “Spit Fire” and free up some space and work on other cars” noted Madylyn. ” With Dan driving? Shit, we might come back with three cars,” said Johnny. “He better not and if he does I’m gonna wring your neck,” joked Madylyn. “Why wring me?” asked Johnny. ” ‘Cause your the one that does the least amount of work,” pushed Madylyn. “Come on everyone we got a race to win,” I said. I jump in “Spit fire” and rev it up before everyone else piles in. Johnny hops in the passenger seat while Joe, Billy, and Luke pile in the back sitting on top of the back seat. Fred says, “go and win the race. I’ll stay behind and help Madylyn.” “Alright you’re loss. We’ll see you after the race,” yelled Joe. We drive to Burger Palace and swing into the parking spot. I quickly slam the brakes causing the three in the back to fall foward. Luke slaps me in the back of the head while he says, “hey take it easy on the brakes.” “Why you’re the one put them on,” I retorted. Everyone starts getting out of the car laughing, when I notice Loryn sitting at an outside drinking a Coke. I walk by and keep joking around with the guys as we head inside to our normal booth. “So Joe you buying today?” I asked. “What do you think I am? Made of money?” Joe replied. As we joke around the waitress comes by and asks, “what’ll it be this time boys?” “I think we’ll have two of everything compliments on Joe,” I said.
As soon as the waitress (Dianne) leaves Joe says, “Really Dan, your having me pay for all that?” “Well your the only one out of all of us that has a job outside the garage,” I replied. As we start joking around again the Dianne comes back with our food and says, “don’t worry Joe, I brought their usuals. On the house. Just as long as Dan wins this race that is.” “Between mouth-fulls Johnny says, “Dan hasn’t lost a race yet Dianne. You’ve seen him race. Why are you doubting him now?” “Well the Black Widows have a new car and it looks pretty fast,” Dianne replied. “Well, I doubt it won’t beat Dan,” said Billy. Dianne heads off to the counter. Loryn walks in and heads to the counter to give the cup back and sees me in the booth with my friends. She walks up to the booth and shyly says, “hi….” “How you doing?” asks Johnny. I smack him in the head and say, “hey leave her alone.” I get up and grab Loryn’s hand and take her outside. “I’m sorry…,” Loryn starts while tearing up. I hold her close, “hey there’s no need to cry it’s just that my friends are a little…, how do I put it? Anyways put it like this they’ll stick it in anything that has legs and a hole.” As soon as she stops crying Jason, the driver for the “Black Widows” pulls up. He says, “is that a new bitch you have? Have you introduced her to the other whores yet?” “How about you save your words for the track? You’re going to need them when all you see is my dust. Nice ride by the way waste of money though. Especially since your about to lose it,” I replied. “We’ll see who loses what,” Jason retorts. After he says that he peels off, burnin rubber down to the track. I take Loryn back inside and tell her that Jason is the driver of the “Black Widows” and they are rivals to us. “They only come around when they want to race. So they can try winning some money or in this case Pinks’,” I say. “What do you mean by Pinks’?”asks Loryn. “Pink-slips or Pinks’ is paperwork for the car,” I explain. “Oh,” Loryn gasps. “So if you lose you dont have your car?” I say, “that’s right. But I don’t plan on losing tonight right boys?” “That’s right,” called out Billy and Joe. “Then what are we waiting for? We got a race to win. Down to the track,” I yelled. Everyone ran out to their cars and I took Madylyn and led her to out to “Spit Fire.” “Hop in,” I said as I cranked the engine and revved it. Loryn got in the car and I peeled out of the parking lot. Causing her to be pushed back in the seat. We stop a couple minutes later and get out of the car. I signal her to stay on the other side of the car. Joe comes around the car and I hand him the paperwork for the car. Jason signals to his little brother named Tony. He comes up and brings the paperwork with him and hands it to Jason. Then Jason hands the paperwork to Joe. Joe says, “you both know the rules. There aren’t any exept city lines and back. First one to cross the finish line wins.” Joe walks away and Jason says, “you know that new bitch will be a great prize to the Black Widows.” I say to Jason, “well she’s not the prize for todays race. Good-luck and don’t get so heartfelt about losing this heap of scrap your driving.” “This heap of scrap just came off the floor today,” replied Jason. “That makes since then. I guess that’s why it still looks good. You haven’t even opened her up have you?” I asked. Instead of answering he just revs his engine and heads to the starting line. I pull up next to him and rev up “Spit Fire’s” engine, Causing the crowd to roar with excitement. I look towards Loryn and wink at her, while Racheal comes out with the flags. The rest of the “Little Devils” are behind Loryn and the “Blazin Thunder”. Racheal calls out, “ON YOUR MARK.” Left flag goes up and we rev our engines. “GET SET.” Right flag goes up and we rev our engines again. “GO!!!” Flags go down. I start burning rubber and double-shifting, leaving a ten foot trail of still smoking rubber behind me. I shift into third gear and then fourth. Everyone’s standing and cheering. I shift into fifth gear and soon hit the city lines. I throw the stick in neutral and throw on the emergency brake, while I do a quick U-turn I take the emergency brake off and throw the stick back into fourth gear. Jason gets alongside of me on my drivers side and tries to bump me off the road. I bump him back while I shift into fifth gear again. I bump him a second time and he hits the curb and brakes on the sidewalk, while I run through the finish line and do another sharp turn and park right where I started the race. Jason pulls up next to me as soon as I get out. After he parks the car, he gets out and says, “next time I’ll race you for that new bitch and I’ll use her as the whore she is.” As soon as he finishes, I grab him and slam his head into the hood and denting the car he was just driving. “You talk like that about her again and I’ll beat the living shit out of you. Do you understand?” I whispered in his ear. He nods his head quickly and I let him up. I call out, “Billy take this heap of junk to the garage.” Billy gets in and starts the car up.