Hey there. Before anything I would like to tell everyone that this is my first ever story. I’m not to confident with my self yet but if you enjoyed it than a rating would be nice.

Also English is not my mother language. I’ve studied English and lived in the USA for a few years. So if I do have any grammatical mistakes then please point them out to me and explain why. Don’t be rude and say my English sucks and not give your reason. Say about opinions on the story. I accept all types of opinions whether they be complimenting my skills and effort or criticizing them. As long as you explain what made you think that way so I can further improve my writing

As the direction the story will be heading to. It won’t be non-stop sex every paragraph because this focuses more on the story than the sex scenes. Nonetheless there will be sex scenes. This first chapter is basically the introduction.

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Light was seeping through my eyes, a blur in front of me was shaping into a beautiful woman’s face as my eyes fluttered open. Her face was so serene yet tears were falling down her face. Her smile showed happiness yet her eyes showed sadness. Once she noticed that I had woken up her face tensed and then slowly calmed as she spoke. “I’m so grateful you are alive.” This women seemed to know me yet I didn’t know who she was. She had my head cradled on her lap which told me that I must know her from somewhere. I racked my brain trying to think from where I knew her but nothing came up.

I slowly sat up and as my vision became clearer I started realizing the environment we were in. It looked like we were in the ruble of some house, rocks were scattered all over the floor, the sun was shining in from where the ceiling was supposed to be, and the windows frames were shattered. I tried to imagine how this place would’ve looked like if it wasn’t destroyed to see if I knew where I was but nothing registered. I didn’t know where I was, and now that I thought about it I didn’t know “who” I was.

I looked to the beauty in front of me who had been quiet since she first spoke hoping to get some answers from her. I tried to speak but the only thing that came out was wordless air. My throat was very dry but I tried to talk once more. The women understood what I wanted and cupped her hands together and water was seemed to flow magically from thin air into her hands. As soon as the water reached to the top of her cupped hands it stopped as quickly it had started. She moved her hands to me and beckoned me to drink. I was suspicious at first but one look into her dark brown eyes told me everything would be ok. I moved myself forward and my lips made contact with the tip of her hands as I slightly opened my mouth and started to drink. I drank and drank yet the water never seemed to deplete one bit. It looked like the water was replenishing itself with every gulp I took.

Once I was fully quenched I backed up a bit and she closed her hands together and the water was no longer there. I sat there staring at her and drawing in her beauty. Her milky white skin contrasted with the black of her hair which flowed down her back to the edge of her spine. Her eyes a dark brown, so mesmerizing you could feel them pull you in. Her lips were red, plump and luscious. Everything about her screamed perfection. And it hurt me when I noticed that there was blood trickling down the side of her head.

“Ma’am are you okay? You seem to be injured” I said, my voice a bit raspy.
“As long as you are well my dear.” She replied with a voice so angelic.
I grabbed the sleeve of my shirt and tried to rip it off but I couldn’t muster enough strength. After trying a second time I gave up and removed my top off. I moved closer to her and used it to cover where it looked like she was bleeding from. She smiled and slowly pulled my hand away from her head and handed me back my shirt. “Do not worry, I think I still have enough energy to heal myself” she said smiling at me. And with that she put her hand next to the top of her head and a greenish light emanated from her palm as she was healing herself. Even the blood started to disappear. Within seconds her injury was no longer there.

“Ma’am, may I ask where I might be?” I said sincerely.
“Do you not know where we are?”
“I’m sorry but I cannot remember anything before I opened my eyes.”
“You surely remember who I am don’t you?”
I slowly shook my head no.
“Do you even remember who you are?”
Again, I shook my head no.
“Nothing?”
I nodded my head

Her eyes started to tear up and she lunged herself at me, wrapping her arms around my body “Oh Ambrose, I told him not to let you attempt it, I knew you were still too young and inexperienced. He insisted and now… now…” She let out a whimper as she cried into my shoulder. I wrapped my arms around her and held her tightly trying to soothe her sorrow.

After she had cried for what seemed like hours but was actually minutes she looked up at me, her face now a light red and her eyes a bit swollen. “The sun is setting, the explosion would’ve been heard across the land. We do not want anyone to know we were here. We must go now. I will explain everything later.” She said as she pulled herself up and walked over to a body that I hadn’t noticed before on the floor behind me. She focused on the body and it slowly started to rise up hovering in the air. She walked towards where a door should’ve been but looked like it was blasted to smithereens by the explosion she mentioned earlier, the body hovering behind her as she left.

I stood up and followed her outside asking myself a thousand questions, who is she, who did that body belong to, where was she taking it, how was she able to manipulate things like magic and many other questions waiting to be answered.

After we walked a short distance, no more than 50 feet away from the ruble of the house, she stopped. With a simple gesture of her hand the body dropped down to the floor like a feather. Another hand gesture from her and the dirt beside the body was weirdly enough digging itself. It looked like there was someone or something digging the ground but nothing was there.