Look could you please comment because this is my first story ever and I was going to add sex but thought of adding it on the next chapter I know lame right so please comment and honest opinion please.



Being me is pretty hard seeing as I can electrocute any living being upon contact and as an added bonus (which is good) I can control electricity at my will and absorb or distribute it. Ok I know that sounds really cool I mean who wouldn’t want to control lightning at their very will but imagine it going out of control and blacking out an entire city because you where hungry and couldn’t see in the dark so you decide to turn on the lights but accidentally eat and entire city’s worth of electricity for three months. Bright side is that you aren’t hungry anymore down side an entire city black out. At least the city had some backup generators. Other than that my life is almost good mostly because I am an orphan and 18 going to college after high school that’s getting paid by me after taking on so many jobs, well enough about my Life’s story lets get on about what s going on now.

Walking to school isn’t so bad unless your getting chased by guys who really want to kill you. So really it isn’t that bad I mean I could shoot them with 2000 volts of electricity each but I have been hiding my powers for eighteen years so why start blowing my cover now right? So instead of shocking the living hell out of them ill use martial arts to kick their asses right? Wrong. Why because I am trying to look like a weak guy that doesn’t draw attention to himself so I let myself get beat up. Everybody probably thinks its funny a well after a few months I am out of here on my way to college but I have to get out of this hell hole so I go to class with a black eye its a good thing I have instant regeneration, after six hours of hell I go to my last class to one of pure heaven mostly because its science and we have a smoking hot teacher with an hourglass figure and (bright side) she is eighteen which is funny when most of the guys strike out so far I am the only one in the whole school who hasn’t asked her out and before you think about it I am not gay at all so don’t ask that well as it turns out apparently there are a total of thirteen students in this class mostly its because its for advanced advanced students with really high grades.

Not to brag but apparently I am really smart along with three guys and ten other girls me being included with the guys, I try to remember all of their names but its hard enough to just remember one for me and/ that name is mine which is jack or Joe maybe Jones but ill go with jak cause its easy to remember and also its the name of a favorite video game of mine. As I walk in the classroom I see I am the second one there along with another girl, Ms. Gonzalez says she is about to start class so I should get in my seat as I sit in my seat the other girl looks my way she’s pretty so I say “hi” “hi” she says back to me I realize as I look at her that she Is new here so I ask her :are you new here?” “i am how did you know?” “i don’t remember names but I do remember faces, and I’d think I’d remember seeing yours” “i don’t know whether that’s a compliment or an insult” “its a compliment” Ms. Gonzalez “ok class we may be the only people here but it doesn’t mean that you two should be flirting we still have a class to go on” as she said it she was looking at me with a hint of jealousy? “Ok class or other wise Mr. jak we have a new classmate with us her name is Alison so at least we have one more person to say hi to her other than me so hi well lets continue on what we left yesterday Alison we where learning about our body’s electrical current and how our brain generates our own electricity so ill just give you the quiz jak and ill catch Alison up to date on our lesson as I take the quiz I start wondering if my powers with electricity work this way then I wonder why I wasn’t wondering this before until I realize that before I was looking at Ms.