This is my first erotic story and I’ve read quite a few. I’m sorry if this doesn’t live up to high standards, but it is my first, so only helpful or nice comments, please.



I stepped off the stage, adrenaline surged through me as my makeup artist immediately began to fuss around my face. “No matter how many times,” I laughed, “it’s still amazing when I go up there.” I said to Elijah.
He turned around, his electric guitar hanging off the straps that were wound over his shoulders. “One last song and then we’re done,” he said, “it’s kinda sad though, right Becky?” He said over the roar of the fans outside. He ran a hand through his dark hair, “You ready?”
I nodded and quickly ran back out onto the stage, taking hold of the mic. “You guys enjoying the show so far?” I yelled, the scream of the fans answered my question. “Awesome!” I grinned, “We’ve had just as much fun as you guys have. Touring the world to perform for you guys has been extraordinary,” I beamed, “This is our last song for the whole tour and we hope you guys enjoy it.” I said, unhooking the mic from it’s stand. Janelle, our keyboard player began the first notes as Elijah joined in with the guitar and Max began to play the drums, and soon enough, I was pouring my heart out into the mic.

I awoke with a groan, my head pounded, no thanks to the massive hangover I had from the small after party we had all had after we got back to the motel. Soon enough, I could hear the sound of a bed creaking and banging against the wall coming from the room across from my room in our motel suite.
Curious, I slowly got up and pulled a silk dressing gown over my naked body (I had a tendency to sleep naked at times), I carefully opened my door and soon enough, words from the room hit my ears.
“Oh, yes! Yes, fuck me, Max!” It was undoubtedly Janelle, her voice was breathless and I heard a grunt coming from who could none other be Max.
I crept towards Janelle’s bedroom door, which was open a crack. I could feel my pussy tingling slightly as I looked through the crack, surprised to see Janelle leaning over the bed on all fours, her smooth, round ass was in the air and I could see the side of Max’s body as he pounded into her asshole. His thick, long cock glistened with her juices, pushing her forward whenever he slammed into her.
“Oh my god,” Janelle breathed, “I’m gonna cum! Baby, I’m gonna cum!” She squealed slightly, her strawberry blonde hair fell over her shoulders as she writhed against his cock, “Fuuuuuck,” she moaned as Max pulled out of her.