I wrote this story a while ago, before I discovered this site. I hope you guys like it. Oh, this is my first story here, so constructive criticism would be appreciated.
I sure hope u like it.
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He walked into the room like a conquering hero, standing over the threshold like Adonis in his glory days. He looked so sexy, so wondrous, that he looked almost good enough to eat. Fisayo couldn’t stop looking at him, couldn’t tear her eyes away from the glistening sweat that gave him an ethereal sheen in the dim candle lit room.
‘Oh James’, she whispered under her breath. Just the mere sight of him sent tingling sensations up her spine, she wanted him so badly, and she was beginning to ache. She reached for him, and a slow smile crept across his face, it was obvious he liked her state of yearn. ‘O baby, come here please’, she begged. His slow smile slowly turned into a lazy grin, he had her wrapped carefully around his little finger and they both knew that. She was slowly becoming a slave to her desires, desires that he and he alone could stir from the depths of her soul and it only served to make him more desirable.
He walked over to the young and nubile beauty that laid spread-eagle before him; silk scarves bind her hands to the bed post. ‘What are you going to do to me?’ she asks, but she already knows, she already knows that before the session would be over, she would have achieved orgasmic bliss over six times. She shivered in half fear, half anticipation as he reached over her to place the night mask over her eyes. He loved making her squirm; she loved the way he made her squirm.
‘Baby’, she moaned into his ear as she felt his hot breath pass over her lips, she tried to reach for him but she didn’t think he would appreciate her forwardness, so she stayed still.
Feather light kisses trail her cheeks, neck, and shoulder. She stifled her moans as well as she could, he didn’t like her moaning loudly, at least not until he was deep inside her.
‘Baby’, the endearment barely made it past her lips before he sealed her lips with a firm kiss.