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First attempt at a story. Constructive criticism welcome
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It was just another usual day at the office, with some work and bit of boredom. She sat in her cubicle and waited for the day to pass.

Her mobile beeped, he had sent an sms.

His sms was, “Can you please come home early today? It is somewhat urgent..”

She grew worried and replied, “What happened? Is everything okay”

“No, not okay…please come soon”


“At least tell me what is the matter?!”


“dear….I really, really, and really need you now… since morning your thoughts have tormented me…let me hold you and be inside of you!”

She immediately sighed and blushed.

She didn’t reply but just smiled and was lost in thought, when another sms came,
“I want to make you completely mine today..as soon as I can”


She breathed deeply, and replied, “see u soon. ttyl”


As she climbed the stairs of the apartment there was a growing nervousness and excitement in her. She knew that he was right there, standing near the door, waiting for her to come, and..and…she wondered what next.
She rang the doorbell, and within seconds the door was opened. For 5 full seconds they just stood there looking at each other. She look downwards, but he was using his eyes to swallow her. He looked at her from head to toe. He looked at her fair face and slender body.

She just stood there, when suddenly he grabbed her arms and pulled her inside and slammed the door shut. Once the door was shut he gave her a tight hug and whispered in her ears “be mine….be mine!”. His hands powerfully massaged her back and lower back and he was inhaling her scent so powerfully as if he wished to inhale her entire body!