this is my first story. there’s a lot of background i didn’ include but this is the only way i could write it, sorry, tips are appreciated.

Terran was nervous.
He had been called to meet with his captain and he knew why. He was not in trouble, he’d had been one of the few men to stand when they had been asked who was willing to do what was necessary to be the captains new right hand.
Terrans captain was different from the rest, he was….odd. To be his right hand you had to abide by his religious beliefs and be his partner as well. He didn’t trust normal warriors enough to let them have a voice come decision making time, he had to trust them on a spiritual level. All of the men knew what this entailed. Which is why only three men rose from their knees and stood at full attention in front of all the others.
Terran had been the one he chose, he told himself this over and over again to calm his nerves. His reasons for standing were mixed. He did want a higher position in the Rat army, but he was also very interested in his captain and his…preferences.
The captains tent loomed before him and he wondered what waited for him behind this curtain, how would his future with the other men be if he accepted the position after their first interview, They would all know what went on between him and his captain behind this curtain. He swallowed the lump that had formed in his throat and pulled the curtain to the side.
The captain was sitting on his knees behind a short table. His long blond hair was loose, Terran had never seen it out of it’s usual braided pony tail. His face really was too beautiful to belong to a man, his lips were soft and pink, his nose was straight and not too long, and his chin was rounded but still strong. Terran would never openly admit it to himself but he was very attracted to his captain.
The captain noticed Terran standing in the door way, staring at him. He gave him a stunning smile and waved him in. Terran walked to his captain and sat down next to him stiffly. The captain turned to him.
“First we’re going to have some tea, and then we will continue with the interview. But before that I have to be sure you fully understand what comes with this position.” The captain said, looking meaningfully into the young warriors eyes.
“I know what you require of your right hands and I’m aware of the way you’re religion works.” Terran said, trying to convince the both of them he was confident and ready for what was coming. The captain smiled again.
“What I ask of my right hands does not come from my religion, it comes from my own self, it comes from my need to be able to completely trust them. My religion is just more accepting than yours. Or the common religion of the warriors, I should say, I don’t know if you actually follow it.” He explained.
“I do, but I’m afraid I’ll have to abandon it for this position.” Terran replied.
“And you’re ready to do that?” The captain asked. Terran nodded.

The two had their tea and made polite conversation. Terran was feeling much more comfortable by the time the captain was ready to proceed.
“You have to assure me that you’re ready for our full interview, because once we start I will not stop.” The captain warned.
“I’m ready, sir.” Terran said bravely, the captain admired it.