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They walked barefoot along the beach, feeling the sand between their toes and listening to the birds as they swooped around their heads. They were here for one reason- find the beach house they had been told about and to make sweet love in, on or around it. They set off into the dunes, following the directions they had been given, loosing sight of the sea. They finally came upon the hut just as the sun was setting and wasted no time exploring.

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It had obviously been found many times before by teenagers looking for somewhere to get drunk and make out with their partners and this showed in the litter on the floor. They walked slowly through to the bedroom to find it in a similar state but noticed the mattress was strangely unaffected. They had their plan- a night of passion under the stars so grabbed the mattress and made their way out, back into the dunes.

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They spread the blanket they had brought with them down on the mattress and laid down, watching the sun as it slowly hit the shimmering sea and turned to each other, embracing and kissing deeply.