My Second Story since I’ve begun writing. I feel that my second go at this will be more worth you guys’ while, as well as finally being 18 and healthier at writing. (*let’s face it the first story sucked reallllly bad*) I feel this story has some butter substance. Aside from that I’ve been highly anal (no pun intended) with getting all the wordage right. I’m writing this chapter by chapter and these stories will be posted slowly so bear with me. I’m also doing it this way so I know what your opinions are of it before hand as well as some *Constructive* criticism. (No stuff like; “that was sh*t” or “lame” give me reasons)
And without further ado and lecturing here it is

*Warning there is no sex in this chapter… it will not be implemented until later in the story*


Sara and Angie

Ch. 1 Summer


It was a cool summer day, worries of school and homework all drifted away on the coastal breeze. It was the sudden clicking of buttons that stirred Sara from her sleep. Angie was texting away again as usual.
“Don’t you ever take a break from that thing?” Sara asked looking from Angie’s phone to the open ocean.
“Nah, not really?” Angie replied nonchalantly, shaking her head jet black hair swaying.
“Heh? figures?” Sara said shifting her weight in her seat. It’s been a seven hour non-stop drive from Nevada to California and she and Angie had finally stopped for a break, the car she admitted was trash but it ran like a dream. Considering for its age she thought it drove real nicely. She remembered how her father had worked on it months prior to her birthday. Her mind wandered, Angie, still typing away, was missing the sunset. Sara once thought about chucking the thing out the window and saying to Angie.
“Your sidekick just met sidewalk?” but she never did.
Sara pulled the vanity mirror down and peered at her self.