Am I turning into a serial killer or savior? Pat two

I’m hoping I did a bit better job than my last attempt. I think my writing is “bad” at the start but gets better as it goes on. Let me remind you this is on a phone so auto correct is king and when I read it again to look for mistakes for some reason I can’t see any. Don’t have a proof reader to help me out with this problem. It will probably be awhile till I write the next part of I ever do so if you like it please be patient and I’m trying to up the quality of my writing but I’ll be the first to admit it’s not very “good” for most people. always welcome helpful comments and please enjoy.





Ever since I shattered that guys collar bone I’ve been trying to get that same rush over and over again with no results. Ive tried skydiving, bungee jumping, rock climbing and a half dozen other things that are suppose to give you a rush but they all seem to fall short. It finally got to the point to where it was affecting my job.

“John come in. John can you hear me? DAMNIT JOHN PICK UP YOUR FUCKING RADIO AND TELL ME HOW MUCH TIME WE HAVE LEFT!!!!”

Oh fuck, radio radio radio there it is. “From the look of things it’s game over Tom.” SHIT SHIT SHIT SHIT!!! GET YOUR HEAD ON STRAIGHT FOR FUCK SAKE YOU CANT LOSE IT AT WORK!!!!

“ok john you have never been this shit at reffing since you started doing this job so what the hell is the deal man?”

“I dont know what it is because its not like im stressed or anything it just seems like my heads in a different place and i cant concentrate for some reason.”

“Well get it together cause I dont want one of my best refs going off the deep end on me all right.”

“ill take care of it and get my head in the game by next week one way or another.”

Just a simple nod was his reply and thats all that was needed.