This is my first story so if you have any tips/comments help me out :p.

“Ughh…” I moaned as I crawled out of bed to turn off the alarm clock. I didn’t realize how tired I was until I reached the bathroom. “Fuck..” I cussed under my breath as I looked in the mirror. I looked like a mess my black choppy hair was all fucked up, my black wife-beater was all wrinkly, and my spider bites were missing thier tips. I hopped in the shower and admired myself as I cleaned myself up. A built tan body nice abs and pecs, a nice dick about seven inches when hard and a little more then two inches thick, I was about 6 ft” with light brown eyes. As I got out the shower I dried off, did my hair, and went to my room throw on a Alesana shirt, black skinnies, white vans, and my band bracelets. I screwed in some new tips to my lip piercings, picked up my backpack and other shit I needed then took one last look in the mirror before heading off to school.

“Hey loser!” Someone called out as I was crossing the street. I turned and smiled “Whats up bro?” I replied to my bestfriend Logan. He had light blue eyes, was wearing a sleeve-less slipknot shirt and some black torn up pants. He was about 6.3 ft” but his black mohawk with blonde tips and his black spiked boots made him look a couple inches taller. “Not much fucking hungry. Ready for our morning smoke?” he asked as he handed me a cigarette. ” Fuck yes it’s the only thing that’s gonna get me through this fucking morning.” I said as I lit up both cigs and chuckled. “Now all we need is music” I said pulling out my ipod stero and blasting some slayer. After we were a few feet away from we school we put out our smokes and kept walking turning up the music more. “Hopefully it annoys the preppy bitches” he said pointing at some chicks around the school entrance. “Dosen’t it always?” I jokingly replied.

As we passed through school getting the usual awkward stares and looks of disgust we met up with our group. There was quite a few of us goths, emos, stoners, skaters, punks all that shit we were labled with. After saying hi everyone me and Logan sat down at the tables where everyone was around “Alex!” Dawn squeaked as she plopped down on my lap throwing her arms around me. I smiled as I hugged her “I missed you Dawn” I said looking at her body. She was wearing a tight black avenged seven fold shirt that showed off her C cup tits,and white skinnies that fit nice around her perky ass. ” I can tell.. by the way my eyes are up here” she grinned pointing at her gorgeous green eyes and moving her short jet blue hair out of her face. “Shut up!” I laughed pushing her off me and standing up. As the bell rang I picked her up and said ” Come on I’ll walk you to class shrimp.